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[May. 11th, 2005|04:34 am] |
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| | My Chemical Romance - Skylines and Turnstiles | ] | Tired of this damn city same old places familar faces irony in deja vu craive something new experiance something too grand not to view I dont want to die in this city I dont want to die in this city feelings hurt turning blue you dont shed a tear you shed a shoe shake off your fears go ahead shed some tears you're not alone forget about the zone and just think to each his own go out there, son and win this one |
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| another poem to set the mood |
[Apr. 5th, 2005|10:20 am] |
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| | Freshman - Verve Pipe | ] | this is a poem I wrote my senior year in highschool at East Kentwood. I don't really like it very much, but then again i'm always hard on myself and my work. But this one I don't really care for. Even thought I dont think its very good, It was good enough to get into Vission , East Kentwood's Litaracy & Art Magazine. here it is:
Inescapable bees shot past, quick grasshoppers dart in long grass, frogs shooting from place to place, horrendous heat reeks human smell, daylight drapes over night's domain, swimming pools, tubes, rafts, expressed fun between all, relaxation re-energizes us for the next day no heavy books, teachers or homework until all too soon this is summer's master plan
Yeah, I hate it. |
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| Poetry, please comment with constructive critism |
[Apr. 5th, 2005|03:16 am] |
"tainted"
under tainted Jesus future hopes and dreams laid out on the table in front of me open for the public to see waiting to be told what i'm doing is right or why I have to fight is this life even my own or am I merely a clone plastic figurine in a child's snowglobe so easily my world is shaken like glass so lightly spoken everything fragile and broken
"image"
With your fake emo glasses and hair covering one half of your eyes tight vintage band shirts Ipod earphones comfortably installed messanger bag at your side riddled with buttons how many does it take to share your views with the world cancer flows between pressed lips with each inhaled breath slowly killing time between indie rock concerts and death in your eyes
"Tides"
an expansive sea, tides pull us towards diverse routes in opposite directions can we cheat ourselves and prematurly know final desination like reading the last page of a book before the first is there a choice which path we follow are we being led by unseen force like the tides which path will lead to bliss
"Spoken"
sound burst into brain radiating from a central point painful much like a stab in the chest with a rusty knife leaving a scar deeper then actions ever could everything that was is no longer feeling crushed, forgotten, alone.
"what purpose"
reflected white light falling from above just enough to see the outline of breath huddled tight trying to maintain warmth you take a hit off your cigarette what is it that fuels your addiction the nicotine runing though your blood or the friendly encounters often had merely because you are there and share their dirty habbit with your bleached blond spiked hair and distant stare you slowly kill yourself but for what purpose does it serve? |
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